RAIN, RAIN GO AWAY
As it's now been raining, every other day since Saturday, my thoughts turned to the weather, and how I've written about it. Here is an extract from BLOOD ON THE SHRINE to give you a taste of how I described a downpour that put DC Johnny Weeks in serious danger.
'The rain continued to fall relentlessly. At the
back of the farmhouse a cast-iron downpipe had come adrift from its bracket and
had swung sideways. So, instead of the water going into a drain, it was discharging
the contents of the gutter down through the coal chute and into the cellar. If
the hatch at the top had remained in place it would have flowed harmlessly
across the yard, but after Weeks’s efforts the water was now forming a pool around
his body. The door at the top of the steps opened, the light from the candles
in the kitchen too weak to penetrate beyond the first couple of steps.'
I obviously like writing about the weather because the rainy theme continued in BLOOD ON THE STRAND.
'Aggie was delighted to be out – the
weather didn’t bother her. Heads down, Russell and Weeks were striding into the
driving rain while she scampered around their feet, tail up, revelling in the
scents she found along the shoreline. The two men said very little to each
other. The roaring of the wind and crashing of the surf made conversation close
to impossible. The storm showed no sign of abating; if anything it was
increasing. They had been tramping along for half an hour, the rain finding a
way into their waterproofs and wellingtons and starting to soak their clothes.
Each was waiting for the other to suggest it was time to turn back when the
terrier began barking excitedly. Looking up and peering through the spray they
could see a large crate slopping backwards and forwards in the surf; each wave
pushing it further up the beach, and then dragging it back again. Splashing
into the shallows they succeeded, with a struggle, in dragging it out of the
water and a little way up the beach. The crate was roughly three feet square by
about two feet tall. It was strongly constructed from stout timbers, firmly
nailed in place.'
And more from BLOOD ON THE STRAND
'Nettie made her
way to the red phone box, pulled the door open and settled inside, making
herself as comfortable as she could for what might be a long wait. She could
clearly see several hundred yards down the track. After a number of settled
days with warm sunshine the weather was changing. The sky was now leaden and
threatening; the wind was fickle, alternating between gentle breaths and gusty
blasts, shaking the scrubby trees and almost flattening the Marram grass either
side of the track. It looked as if rain wasn’t far off. Nettie hoped she wasn’t
going to get soaked.
However, after 20 minutes, she heard the sound
of an engine: a plume of dust rose, and was then blown sideways by the wind.
She watched eagerly, just as fat blobs of rain hit the windows of the phone
box. As more raindrops fell, washing the dust off the glass, she could see the
blue Morris bumping slowly along the track. The rain was starting to fall more
forcefully now, the gusty wind blowing it at 45 degrees. She took a chance and
made a dash for the Ford. Pulling the door open she jumped inside and pulled it
closed behind her.'
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